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Muh Fashy Bookshelf's avatar

This should have been orchestrated into stanzas.

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Constantin von Hoffmeister's avatar

No, it is a prose poem in the original.

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Muh Fashy Bookshelf's avatar

Bukowski was the king of prose poetry, he utilized stanzas in all his poems. If this is how they did it back then, so be it. I just find it hard to read, and less efficient.

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